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Mobile App UI & Copy Rewrite


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Scenario
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You’re a UX writer at WingScanner, a new low-cost airline.
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There is a new feature — customers can pay an extra $20 to use faster security lanes
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Goal
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Improve the original screen's copy + design
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Create a clever name for the feature
What Improved in the Final Version?
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Avoids confirmation shaming
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Easier to skim through
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Clearly states the benefit in the headline ​
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Organizes extra information into simple bullet points
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Less cramped interface
Project Notes
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Encourage customers to buy access to shorter security lanes.
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Create a catchy name for the feature.
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The feature will be the last screen before checkout.
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